Friday, July 20, 2012

Weightlifter


The audience are trying to hold their breath as the weightlifter muscle are straining. The man is struggling from lifting the heavy weights. He is trying to focus about what he is doing it for. He is doing it for gold. His arms are fool with veins and he’s trying to balance the bar of the weights. He’s imagining that he is th strongest in the world. He say to himself do never give up

1 comment:

  1. Hey Piri,
    Nice writing there I have to admit you had me hooked in from the start it was interesting how you said that the weightlifter wasn't ready to give up and he wasn't. You might want to recheck how you spelt a few of your words or might want to change some.

    Keep Up The Good Work
    Cruz c:

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