Saturday, November 26, 2011

In The City


Then we went to the Arcade places. There was100 game plays there. I was playing all these gun games and they were mostly it’s all about killing. We went to this man that was playing the drumming games and he was brilliant.
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  1. Brodie-JackNovember 29, 2011 at 9:11 AM

    Hi Piriniha,

    I liked your story about in the city I wish I could go there it likes so cool in there with all the games.

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  2. KobeFebruary 13, 2012 at 9:17 AM

    Hi Piriniha,

    That sounds like a very cool day in town but at the end of the story it says,were mostly it's,you need to change it, it doesn't make sense

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