For Easter I went to this holiday program. They called it the Loggus. My famliy came with me too, but some did not come because it is only for kids one to fourteen only. And the Loggus was a church. I new because the things of God.
The first day we had to stay in. The second day we went to the museum. Third we went to the zoo. The zoo was cool because I was near the giraffe and my cousin was looking for me and he was running and he ran in to me and I almost fell of the deck but I was holding on to the bar.
For breakfast we had muffins,raisins and some fruit.The last day we stayed in and draw ed and that. But the boys went to this big as park to play touch and this rope game. The girls were making burgers and juice to drink. As we came back we went in to the hall to watch some movies and when we were finished it was time to eat I had five packets of raisins and had six burgers and I took eight burgers to my family.
The food at your holiday programme sounds very yummy.
ReplyDeleteAre these paragraphs all introductions?
This reads like the whole recount.
Make sure each paragraph is about a new idea. Your third paragraph has lots of different thing happening in it but not much detail about any of them.