At night there was some trees and bushes that had very dark places were criminals can hide. The forest was called Hide out. Once there were some American Soldiers and a naughty man that murdered some people. The Soldiers ran at night searching for the bad man. His name was Kayde.
The Soldiers Were looking for him to hang him because he kept killing until he got his money. In jail when he got bailed out he asked for his money and the officer said how much did you have and Kayde said 10 cents. The officer said we can not afford that.
He killed 954 000 soldiers because he didn't get his 10 cent. The party of soldiers had an idea they said we will place 10 cent on the ground and he will grab it and we will be hiding and then take him to the crowd and hang him.
Kayde saw 10 cent but he knew it wasn’t his special one. He heard some whispering saying he’s falling for it. But no because that is were he put his trap were the soldiers are.
The Soldiers Were looking for him to hang him because he kept killing until he got his money. In jail when he got bailed out he asked for his money and the officer said how much did you have and Kayde said 10 cents. The officer said we can not afford that.
He killed 954 000 soldiers because he didn't get his 10 cent. The party of soldiers had an idea they said we will place 10 cent on the ground and he will grab it and we will be hiding and then take him to the crowd and hang him.
Kayde saw 10 cent but he knew it wasn’t his special one. He heard some whispering saying he’s falling for it. But no because that is were he put his trap were the soldiers are.
Hey Piri,
ReplyDeleteThat is some good writing but there are some spelling mistakes like "were is where" but the rest are fine.