Weightlifter
The
audience are trying to hold their breath as the weightlifter muscle are
straining. The man is struggling from lifting the heavy weights. He is
trying to focus about what he is doing it for. He is doing it for gold.
His arms are fool with veins and he’s trying to balance the bar of the
weights. He’s imagining that he is th strongest in the world. He say to
himself do never give up
Hey Piri,
ReplyDeleteNice writing there I have to admit you had me hooked in from the start it was interesting how you said that the weightlifter wasn't ready to give up and he wasn't. You might want to recheck how you spelt a few of your words or might want to change some.
Keep Up The Good Work
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