Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Persuasive writting

We should all have one television free day per week. There are many reason for these. will rest your eyes for a day, and save some power on your electricity bill .

Firstly, if you turn your t.v off for a day it will give your eyes a break and it will make your electricity.

Secondly you need to do your work and your mum probable let you out and play with your friend's. It will make your family better and your future.

I think people should only watch TV once a week. Don’t you?

1 comment:

  1. You make this sound like a good ideas because you have many reasons to support your argument.
    Make sure each paragraph is about 1 idea though Piriniha. Your second paragraph doesn't explain just 1 idea.

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