Persuasive writting

We should all have one television free day per week. There are many reason for these. will rest your eyes for a day, and save some power on your electricity bill .

Firstly, if you turn your t.v off for a day it will give your eyes a break and it will make your electricity.

Secondly you need to do your work and your mum probable let you out and play with your friend's. It will make your family better and your future.

I think people should only watch TV once a week. Don’t you?

Partly cloud

This movie is about a clouds making babies like kittens, puppies, children. The stork was giving out babies. There are these storks helping the pink clouds, and a gray cloud. The gray cloud made bad babies and the pink one made good babies. It was set up on the clouds were no one could see. I like this movie it is pretty cool because just making a puppy out of cloud and add storm to it and it comes to life. The bird did not like the way he made things because the alligator, goat, hedgehog ,sharks and the stork made it as he looked as he was leaving him so he got angry and then he cried because he thought he had no stork. Then the stork came and he brought some armor. So they went on with there job.